So I am not yet using this resource correctly. I will get better with time and practice. Here another one of my poems. This one is from my already published book Eve's Tears. I hope you like it and comment.
My lover comes to me as a merman
oily scales glistening
His locks of kelp emboss my breasts
with strange tattoos.
As his wet lips press on mine
my senses race .......
and washed with his tidal passion
we tumble and turn
to ocean depths
sending air kisses
skyward.
We dive and delve -
new intimacies
are discovered
the hidden
treasure
of love
exposed.
well if i write my own comments at least it will look like someone is interested.
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Deletethank you for your support and encouragement.
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